Advance Rping [ Whoever uses this is no noob ]

Well im tired of you people doing this.
-Runs fast now-
-Takes out gun-
-shoots in head-
-hits so hard-
WRONG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is how you rp my way.
-I see this man in front of me out of my distance-
-i charge at him staring at his eye-
-i send my hand to his neck-
-i hold him at his spot here-
-i send him to the air high-
Correct
-I pull out my gun seeing this man from a distance-
-i load it here making no noise at all-
-i aim to his back here him not seeing me-
-i take my shot to his back-
-the bullet travels with speed-
-ripping threw his skin here-
-ripping pas his musles-
-his flesh splats all over the floor-
-he drops to the ground his nerves damaged-
-Dead corpse on ground-
Hope this helps ............

Greetings OldNinja,
The people in the forums don't use that type of "fighting", I mean the first one.
And.. while Rping you should do Actions, example:

- Dancing in front of the man here -

etc...
Or talking aswell.

dont u take out a gun already loaded? shudn't it be like
-takes out gun slow-
-grips it tight-
-turns safety off-
-stares at the man-
-aims at man's head-

blah blah blah
so yeah, the gun shud be loaded right?

- Holding the gun firmly -
- sending it up here -
- looking through the scope of the gun -
- taking aim at the zombie now -
- Squeezing the trigger here -
- sending the bullet out of the gun -
- a loud sound is produced in the process -
- it hits the zombie in the chest -

.

-Gripping my M4 With ease now-
-Loads a Clip in so fast-
-As i aim it at the Test Dummie's head now-
-as i Flick the Safety button to Semi-Auto
-as i fire 3 Shots with ease-
-as it Rips through the Forehead with Devistating Damage-
-as it Rips through the brain-
-as the Brain is Now Dead-
-as the Dummy Falls now-
-as he Lays down Flat Faced-